It's really quite fantastic. See for yourself.
Lies and myths
Blown out of your mouth
Love taken by manipulation
You make me want to pack my bags and head on south
Screaming to hear your voice
To overpower and control everything
My dad hates me
It's hard to cover up the sting
Secrets seething through the open
Word said that should be silenced
Fists held back
Holding back the violence
Practice what you preach
Before giving the advice
Emotions build up
I don't want to gamble but, you force me to roll the dice
Anonymous asks:
How'd you like it?! Everyone PLEASE give critisism! Lurve you all! <3
Post your feedback in the comments section.
6 comments:
thanks for the compliment about the peom miss t! it means a lot, happy b-day you crazy hippie! ☼
~Emolaylay
love it!!
~popcorn
i love this poem its great!! and its wrote really good!!
~diana<3
hi mrs t! its emolaylay and shanana! shes sleeping over! whoop whoop! yeah its awesomeness but shanana likes the poem (yeahhhh buddy!) and i think i did a pretty fine job meself! hehe anyways happy almost not bday! hahaha :) have an adamrific lamberttastic night! we larva chu!
~Emolaylay and Shanana ☼♥
here's another one if you wanna post it mrs t
Pretty Little Smile
Every moment we must cherish
Every day we must hold near
Cuz’ Tomorrow may never come
We could lose somebody dear
To us
Find what it’s like to fall headfirst
Keep away troubles and the pain
And if we hold on
Something magical could happen
But just incase
Keep your pretty little smile on your face
Every day we should be thankful
For what God has given us
Every one we must treat kindly
It’s good that you’ll never lose trust
Find what it’s like to fall headfirst
Keep away the troubles and the pain
And if we hold on
Something magical could happen
But just incase
Keep your pretty little smile on your face
Find what we need to succeed
Dream a big ole dream
Everything hanging by it’s seem
And if something would happen
It’s still just you and me
Find what it’s like to fall headfirst
Keep away the troubles and the pain
And if we hold on
Something magical could happen
But just incase
Keep you pretty little smile on your face
If something should awaken us
From this deep, deep sleep
Called life
Just incase
Yes, just incase
Keep your pretty little smile on your face
Hope you guys like it.
~E
thank you everyone :DD it helps lots! but, i need to know what my weak point is :P
~Emolaylay
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